Friday 18 November 2016

Moffat Era Rewatch: Notes On "Listen"

·      This is my favourite Moffat story, heck, my favourite episode of all time - it beats out "The Pandorica Opens/ The Big Bang", "The Empty Child/ The Doctor Dances", and "Heaven Sent", to name some of the more obvious choices. It's an excellent episode for Clara and Capaldi's Doctor, explores its themes of fear, childhood, soldiers, love, and even the scientific method and the intersections of these themes.
·      The episode is structured around four Four vignettes. Three of these, set at Rupert’s orphanage, Orson’s cabin and the barn, mark out the three main acts of the story, with Clara and Danny’s date woven in between them. As a result, I think it’s best to analyse each in order.
The Date
·      The first post-credits scene once again sees Moffat returning to his “Coupling” roots, with a non linear scene intercutting Clara in her flat, reflecting on her date going wrong, giving a nice parallel to “Into the Dalek”, which does the same thing, but from Danny’s perspective.
·      The first thing worth noting is Clara and Danny’s first argument, where they clash over Danny’s time serving in the army. There’s a parallel to Danny’s brief confusion over Clara’s joke in “Into the Dalek”: once again, Clara makes what she sees as an innocuous joke about Danny being a soldier, which leads to him visibly flashing back to trauma from his time in the army, and feeling the need to defend what he did. The difference is that this time, Danny’s defensive response to an insensitive joke leads to a fully fledged argument, because of the barrier between civilians and soldiers – Danny refers to them as “people like you”, which Clara takes offense at. It’s worth wondering why she takes offense here – is it because she doesn’t like Danny making generalisations about civilians, or because her TARDIS travels mean she doesn’t see herself as a naïve civilian? Given her later character development, it’s worth suggesting it’s something of a combination of the two.
·      Then, after Clara makes peace with Danny, they argue again, this time over Clara’s double life, which she is currently hiding from Danny, but almost lets slip by revealing that she knows his childhood name – once again, she accidentally pokes at a source of pain for Danny with a misjudged joke – this time, a name he admitted to not liking when she met him as a child. He asks her to “Tell me the truth, because I know when people are lying to me”, a significant line for the rest of the season, being the main source of conflict between the two characters. And yet, Clara, never is quite able to tell Danny the whole truth, which is the lingering source of tension for their relationship at the end of the episode. Here, it seems to be due to a fear that Danny will find her TARDIS life “weird”, but, as the overall arc of the season will suggest, there may be more to it than that.
·      So, while it is separate from the main “plot” of the episode – the Doctor’s search for the hiders – this vignette ties in nicely with the overall themes of the story, making it a lovely thread to have running through the episode. For Danny and Clara, fear and love go hand in hand, and their fear gets in the way of them acknowledging the way they really feel about each other (although this seems resolved by the end of the episode, it will in fact be a defining feature of their relationship).
Rupert’s orphanage
·      Danny and the Doctor both have childhoods haunted by the possibility of becoming a soldier, with Clara linking the two by describing the "Dan the Soldier Man" toy as "a soldier so brave he doesn't need a weapon": it is particularly notable that the camera blurs Clara out of focus to bring the Doctor into focus as Clara says this, highlighting the fact that she gets this idea from the Doctor. Capaldi’s expression as she says the words is a superb piece of silent acting: the Doctor does not seem pleased by her comparison, perhaps because he discomfited by being called a soldier, perhaps because he feels he doesn’t live up to the ideal Clara suggests, or perhaps because he doesn’t recognise the link Clara is making. In many ways, the tension between Danny and the Doctor is a product of their similarities as much as their differences.
·      And parallels between the leads abound throughout the story. Clara mirrors the Doctor here (not for the first time) by dropping into Danny's childhood to influence his future, just as Eleven did for Amy.
·      There's also this gorgeous bit of foreshadowing for the conclusion:
CLARA [talking about Rupert's bed]: Do you know what's under there?
RUPERT: What?
CLARA: Me!
It’s a nice moment that highlights the way Clara becomes the “monster” of the story, becoming the source of the Doctor’s fear and obsession.
·      And I also want to mention Capaldi's performance, which is an extra level of astonishing here - his acting in the "monster under the covers" scene is incredible - first he's cracking jokes about "Where's Wally?", then he goes full hero, and gives his "fear is a superpower!" speech, then he moves to pure terror, desperately urging Rupert and Clara to not look at the thing under the blanket (a major clue that the episode isn't about the possible monster, but is instead about the Doctor's fears and obsessions). It's an astonishing range to move through in minutes of screentime. The scene's on youtube, go watch it now.
The Cabin at the end of the Universe
·      The first thing to note about this section is what it reveals about the episode’s exploration of the Scientific method: the episode is about the Doctor forming a hypothesis in the pre credits sequence, his attempts to prove said hypothesis, and the way his own biases get in the way of his experiment. The Doctor’s obsession becomes apparent here, as he sends Clara back to the TARDIS, saying “I have to know”: he is working from the assumption that there is something to see, rather than trying to prove or disprove his hypothesis, while offering equal opportunity for it to be right or wrong.
·      Also significant is the Doctor’s offer to check Danny’s prospects, a line that both provides dramatic irony in the context of this episode, as the Doctor seems to have shown Clara what her prospects with Danny are by introducing her to Orson, and a subtle piece of foreshadowing for the finale, where Danny’s lack of a future sets the plot in motion.
·      Clara, meanwhile, is confronted with what seems to be her future with Danny, after just going into his past, posing the question of the effect time travel has on Clara and Danny’s free will. She’s finds out enough to make assumption she has a lasting future with Danny, in spite of her struggle to make the date work – arguably this knowledge of a possible future that enables her to move past the fear that acted as a crutch during her date with Danny, and open up to him at the end of the episode.
·      Which leads us to the mystery of Orson: due to Danny’s death at the end of the season, we’re left wondering who he is, and what his link to Clara’s timeline is. Moffat has suggested he’s a different relative of Danny’s, but that doesn’t really line up with the dialogue in the episode: I prefer an alternative explanation: that Orson is exactly what an initial look at this episode would suggest – Clara and Danny’s great-grandson. The Doctor compares him to Robinson Crusoe, and one of the most famous images from that story can explain Orson’s appearance in this one. It is well established that time can be rewritten in the Moffat era, and Orson is footprint on a beach, part of a future that will never happen, washed away by the waves of time. Either way, it is entirely in keeping with the nature of this story that it leaves a deliberately unanswered question for the overall arc of season eight. And furthermore, it suggests that Clara and Danny do have a measure of free will going forward: this is a potential future for them, but not a definite one.
The Barn
·      “He doesn’t want to join the army” says the woman who tells the young Doctor he can join the other boys in the orphanage. Unlike Rupert, who is comforted by the toy soldiers, the army is not a source of comfort for the Doctor, but of fear, a representation of failure: the unnamed man suggests it is the only viable alternative to becoming a Time Lord, which he does not believe the Doctor is capable of.
·      Clara continues to mirror the Doctor in this section, piloting the TARDIS away from the end of the universe, echoing the Doctor's "Do as you are told" mantra when asking him to fly away from the barn without looking to see where they've been. She is becoming more and more Doctor like, not just in her personality and thought processes, but in the narrative space she occupies.
·      The episode concludes with Clara’s speech to the child Doctor. “Clever people can hear dreams” she tells the young Doctor, a callback to Clara saying the same words to Rupert. Just as she did in that scene, Clara chooses to comfort a scared little boy, turning the Doctor’s fear into the source of his heroism. Helping the child Doctor also enables Clara to open up to Danny, a fact emphasized by the words “fear can bring us together” accompanying the image of her and Danny’s first kiss.
·      “Listen” is really something special. It's a beautifully layered, utterly moving script, that gets better on every rewatch for me. A story where we learn that the bravest hero in the universe was, and in a way still is, just a little boy who's afraid of the dark. A story that gives us this line:
"The deep and lovely dark. You wouldn't see the stars without it."


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